The author states that everyday there were an estimate of 12 billion display ads,3millions of radio commercials, and also more than 200,000 TV commercials. Ads is no longer in the usual place such as buses,billboards,or stadiums it is everywhere your eyes come to an rest.the Author also state even in company they have advertisement about supermarket carts so that you can see ads while you shop.the Author last paragraph stated that there is nowhere to run and no one is exempt.
The author state that "your kids watch pepsi and snickers ads in the classroom. If a kid is busy paying attention to ads about pepsi and snickers they will not be able to learn anything in the classroom and also fail that class.they should not have advertisement is school cause it will distract a lot kids on their school work.
My example about this passage is that everyday I get an advertisement on my phone about jobs hiring even early in the morning I get text about an advertisement. i also get advertisement about different product.
In my conclusion,there is nowhere that you go and there is not a advertisement.there will be a advertisement everywhere you turn.
I need to have a longer paragraph. i also need a dictionary.
ReplyDeleteLisa-- I really liked the way you got some of the main points of the reading down in your summary. You also clearly know how an essay is organized: introduction, body, and conclusion. Good!
ReplyDeleteMy suggestion is one of balance: notice how much of the piece is about the reading and how much it is about your own experience of advertisements. The readers want to know about you, so probably spending less time on the summary and more on how advertisements affect you would give the piece more balance.