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The perfect world versus the real world (Google Groups question 1)
Cristoff creates what he considers a “perfect world” for Truman to live “happily ever af

 No, I wouldn’t wanna live in christoff”s world because in his world everything was fake his mother, wife and friends were all fake. They had even fake his father dead. they  they have him feeling like hes a prisoner enery where he goes there somebody watching him I wouldn’t wanna be in the society.in the film christoff’s state that he is not aware of what is happening in his life and he can’t control it. In this case turman don’t know wat is happening in his life. Until one day he notice.
         The world we living in is very different from what truman is living he want.in truman world everybody greet him wit a good morning,they were all friendly and nice. but they are only doin it because everything was fake and he didnt notice.he is good because he did everything the same everyday until he notice there was something goin on.truman need to find out why everything is so perfect but is so boring.he was manage to escape all this lies that he had been born into. In our world i dont think people would want their life to be make out of money.cuz people wouldnt want their friends to lie to them.In the film christoff stated that the world truman is living in is a sick place and that seaheaven is where he belong
     Seaman want to eliminate that the outside world is not perfect and what hes living in now is where hes suppose to be.

blog10 Reflection on Skills

In writing skills i have learned about annotating,summarizing and how to write a thesis statement. i had learn that you have to agree or disagree when your writing annotating. it also help you respond critically,it better to underline important fact in the passage. i leared that summarizing have to be written in your own words. you have to be mostly fcus on the main ideas you should always mention the author name in your essay.
     What have prove that i have learned is when i be writing in my blog .
  The material that we have covered that still unclear to me is the thesis statement i dont reallly understand that really good.I didnt get to learned anything on paragraphing beacause i ahve miss that class i would like to make up that work.i didnt really understand the summary on "the allegory of the cave.
   i would say i feel more confident o my basic skills because i have learned about how an essay should be like and how an essay should be for the cat essay.the nly thing i shuld not do is summarize the same essay as the passage try t use my own words.
    i would like to get more help on the thesis statement and on the paragraphing.

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blog8:developing your summary and response to"I know the truth,so dont bother me with facts.

In "I know the truth,so don't bother me with the fact,"Jeffery Kluger state that humans have long deceived by rumors,but the effort often state university determine a study of false beliefs,want it takes to free for communication at ohio state university,the both recruited 750 people that were familiar with believing them they will determine if opinion would change and how theirs facts will present.kluger stated that even when they take time to learn its often not good. The author ends his passage by stating thAT "We must not always agree on what the facts means,we should agree .
           i agree with the Kluger when he states that"people do take the time to learn the facts,the effort often no good because people dont always believe in everything.alot of people dont really wanna be told that they are wrong.its up to us if we wanna if we wanna believe in alot of things.

blog 7 reflecting on thesis based writing

i have learn from the thesis based is that a claim is a argument that you have learn.i have learn that a thesis statement is a single claim to support or explain the essay.

i have lean that i learn it because i had do my own claim and thesis statement

 Whati help my learning is working in groups and dr x example.

I was kind of confusing and didnt really understand most of it.

blog 6 things i do not beleive in anymore

the things that i do not believe in is
1.santa clause
2.bloody marie

blog 5 summarizing what the allegory stand for

In Plato's "The allegory of the cave." socrates tells a story to his student Glaucon to explain humans living underground. Humans neck and legs were chained so that they cant move.Behind them were fired blazing at distance.Humans could see only their shodows or others and also could only see the shodows of the object that were being carried by looking straight at the light they would have pain in their eyes he will not be able to see anything.Socrates continues by saying that the prisoner got used to the light of the outside world and soon after he was thrown back to the cave. At first he couldn’t see inside of the cave because his eyes got adjust to the light from outside the cave. Now that darkness is in his life again he felted lost.

Blog 4: Revision of "Hype."

                        In this passage the "hype" The author Kalle Lasn inform us that Advertisements are the most prevalent and toxic of the mental pollutants.      The author states that everyday there were an estimate of 12 billion display ads, 3millions of radio commercials, and also more than 200,000 TV commercials. The author say that Ads is no longer in the usual place such as buses, billboards, or stadiums it is everywhere your eyes come to an rest. The Author also state even in company they have advertisement about supermarket carts so that you can see ads while you shop. The Author last paragraph stated that there is nowhere to run and no one is exempt. Lasn state that the pollution flood your brain with a lot of message per day about advertisement.
         The author state that "your kids watch Pepsi and snickers ads in the classroom. If a kid is busy paying attention to ads about Pepsi  and snickers they will not be able to learn anything in the classroom and also fail that class. They should not have advertisement is school cause it will distract a lot kids on their school work. I think that a lot of advertisement will mess up people brain because its so many advertisement that a lot of people will not be able to think.

                  

blog3.reflecting on a summary

I have learn that summary have to be in your own words talkin  about the main ideas in the passage.i also learn that you dhould not copy the same words from the text.

-I know that i have learn today in class because i could write my own summary by using the information i had learn in class.

-i learned that you have to use the author and title in your summary and also that you have to state the begin and end in the passage.

-i feel good that i have learn alot about writing a summary and the format that you should use in your summary.

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Annotation helps me respond more in my texts. helps me to understand more

from writing annotations i get to learn new strategy on how to respond to an article

an annotating will make me a better writng because  it help me organize  my essay and gets more information.

I learn that annotation really help us on writing a stategy from reading.

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     In this passage the "hype" The author Kalle Lasn inform us that Advertisements are the most prevalent and toxic of the mental pollutants.I argue wit this statement about Advetisement because there are advertisement everywhere you turn. some people get distracted from all the advertisement.
      The author states that everyday there were an estimate of 12 billion display ads,3millions of radio commercials, and also more than 200,000 TV commercials. Ads is no longer in the usual place such as buses,billboards,or stadiums it is everywhere your eyes come to an rest.the Author also state even in company they have advertisement about supermarket carts so that you can see ads while you shop.the Author last paragraph stated that there is nowhere to run and no one is exempt.
         The author state that "your kids watch pepsi and snickers ads in the classroom. If a kid is busy paying attention to ads about pepsi  and snickers they will not be able to learn anything in the classroom and also fail that class.they should not have advertisement is school cause it will distract a lot kids on their school work.
        My example about this passage is that everyday I get an advertisement on my phone about jobs hiring even early in the morning I get text about an advertisement. i also get advertisement about different product.
      In my conclusion,there is nowhere that you go and there is not a advertisement.there will be a advertisement everywhere you turn.

my expectation

  In this writing class i expect to improve in my writing skill I also wanna pass this class so that i could take the cat-w n pass to go to the ENA101.